Comments on: Fiction Friday http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/ General musings and fun. Fri, 24 Jul 2009 12:51:05 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: almckillop http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/#comment-16 almckillop Mon, 27 Apr 2009 17:00:30 +0000 http://almckillop.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-16 Thanks Annie. I like using dialogue to keep the pace up in a story, but only if it feels right! Cheers. Al Thanks Annie. I like using dialogue to keep the pace up in a story, but only if it feels right! Cheers.

Al

]]> By: Annie http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/#comment-15 Annie Mon, 27 Apr 2009 13:44:33 +0000 http://almckillop.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-15 oh - forgot to say - pop on over and say hi at my FF... http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/04/doom-of-gods.html oh – forgot to say – pop on over and say hi at my FF…

http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/04/doom-of-gods.html

]]> By: Annie http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/#comment-14 Annie Mon, 27 Apr 2009 13:36:20 +0000 http://almckillop.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-14 This story has a nice tempo to it and you are carried along with the dialogue without it being intrusive or sounding false or contrived.( a great sign) loved the end - being in the right place at the right time.... This story has a nice tempo to it and you are carried along with the dialogue without it being intrusive or sounding false or contrived.( a great sign)

loved the end – being in the right place at the right time….

]]> By: almckillop http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/#comment-13 almckillop Fri, 24 Apr 2009 22:51:33 +0000 http://almckillop.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-13 Clooney might not have been everyone's cup of tea, but he certainly gets my wife's vote :-) Donna probably went and bought the dress anyway. Clooney might not have been everyone’s cup of tea, but he certainly gets my wife’s vote :-) Donna probably went and bought the dress anyway.

]]> By: lissa http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/04/24/fiction-friday/#comment-12 lissa Fri, 24 Apr 2009 22:19:00 +0000 http://almckillop.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-12 I wouldn't have pick George Clooney for this but I guess he's okay to drool over, I was thinking of Julie might get money but not in this way, though I kind of felt sorry for Donna having to go to vegas with Julie and get nothing I wouldn’t have pick George Clooney for this but I guess he’s okay to drool over, I was thinking of Julie might get money but not in this way, though I kind of felt sorry for Donna having to go to vegas with Julie and get nothing

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